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Exhibition
It will be a text battle
Bars due Wednesday 23rd April
Voting ends Saturday 26th April
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12 lines (maximum 1080 characters excluding spaces)
Post your references so you don't get jerked
No extensions & absolutely no sportsmanship
@Slayerr.
How’s that bus fare bitch? You’s a goof, it’s time your overconfidence flew the coop,
You got sonned by an egg, oops did you not realise that’s what being a cocky dude’ll do?
You feed bottoms & bottom feed, You vs Faq - horror scene, I was gonna ask him to drop for me to prove even your best’d still get bodied g, but getting Faq-to-reply would be pointless, you already got a sheet,
If he’d made the quarters we’d have seen Diction dead this tard's lyrics,
Thinking “there’s nowhere for-mal-to-hide”, just to get embalmed in it,
Sewage treatments the only time I see Slay-climbin shit, your last 4 battles; all Ls, time to quit,
Better yet, arrange them in a box shape, like this pic, https://i.ibb.co/FGgrCbV/l-bOX.png then make an effort to fuckin think outside of it,
If this cock washing hobgoblin gets outta line the glocks poppin,
I'm sayin Slayerr. the moment you R extra, the dots on him,
I’m making out he’s a no-talent fool, but on the mixtape I got a track called "ASAP" with dude,
though "USSR"s what I might rebrand it to, cuz in Soviet Russia you don't carry bag, bag carries you
-EyeDealIstic beat Slay with a bar about him sucking dick for bus fare then walking home, his avatar is an egg, hence sonned by an egg / cock-a-doodle-doo
-getting Faq-to-reply-would / factory plywood + sheet obviously meaning a sheet of ply & a body sheet
-for-mal-to-hide / formaldehyde, used for embalming bodies
-slay-climbin shit / slaked lime in shit is how sewage is treated
ur a fruad! Thats why I told ya we ain’t the same ur just a bad gag
Thought u was a G like me but the different straps round our shoulders are proof u ain’t man Bag
British dental hygiene gets a poor ride, so I’ll help u out when we meet n greet
I’ll give ur teeth fluoride n then watch u pick ‘em back up off the street
I hate the thought you’ll win with poor bars n on rep alone u retired can
Coz It’ll take more than ur name to convince this crowd that you’re actually fire man
Coming at me? A straight up G? I’ll cable tie ur wrists for trying this, you should be admiring dawg, put you in a box with a shallow lid
So the next time ur spitting bars it’ll be in front of a firing squad like that hallows vids
This fags keen to hide his second life as a drag queen in a feminane mode
Equipped with bushy brows n hair wrapped in a towel, lips with enough filler to pass as a Naruto episode
Bag put his life savings on winning this! Fuck sake, he’s a heathen bloke, this tourney ain’t legitimised
So when that leaves him broke i can’t articulate how the RW winner will feel but the verb is victimised
1)straps round the shoulders/we ain’t the same I have a rifle he has a man bag
2. Fluoride is the thing in toothpaste that’s cleans teeth. Fluoride/floor ride
3. his real names sam and fireman Sam was a popular kids cartoon in the uk
4. I’m a G and for dissing me he’ll be in front of a firing squad and hallows spit in front of a company of marines
5. Naruto was a big anime but renowned for filler arcs
6. Virb is favourite to win the final but there won’t be any money left for him after bag lost his life savings betting on himself…poor Virb or jack
Super dope battle. Just to be sure: I didn't have any preferences going into this, but I think Bag took it. Both had dope lines, but imo this is something of the best I've seen from Bag.. Guess he's been saving up from not being in the tourney himself.
Like already the first line just sounds good and flows really well. You's a goof /flew the coop, and then topping it off with a cock-a-doodle-do wordplay. The plywood bar I didn't get at all. Maybe if it would have been Far-to-reply-would, but still not something that would have been on my radar to catch it, I think. And I'm not sure I get the dopeness of getting a sheet of factory plywood, but I guess there's a double entendre there, so ok. I´For-mal-to-hide was sick. Slay-climbin shit I didn't get either, but I like that it's a setup bar, because as a straight punch it may be a little involved to know how sewage is treated (but what do I know?) The L bar was something I would probably not normally fuck with, but somehow it just worked really well. Thinking outside the box and everything. Cock washing hobgoblin ... sick flow. And the Soviet Russia joke to end it was banging too. So just a really solid verse, imo.
On Slayerrs first bar, qua what I recently wrote in RW chat, I think maybe I just favor something more naturally sounding, cuz when he says "you ain't man, Bag", I think I would usually say "you ain't A man, Bag", but maybe it's also just my non-nativeness kicking in. A little bit the same with teeth A floor ride, but I ain't mad at that, though, because that bar was banging either way. Firing squad / Hallows vid was fire. The feminane also confused me because I don't know if that's some slang word, but I guess it was just supposed to be straight feminine? Naruto episode punch was cool, though (after I saw the explanation). Ender was pretty funny as a concept, I guess, with some good references to the whole tourney.
Overall, I just enjoyed reading Bag's verse more because of some hiccups in the wording/spelling/flow of Slayerrs verse that's probably very idiosyncratic to the way I read stuff. Dope stuff from both gentlemen, though.
cocky dude’ll do? funny as hell dope punch..
got a sheet- solid wordplay here and great build up decent punch..
got a little lost on the box scheme four ls but i have a question on formal to hide.. is it also a double Formaldehyde the gas?
the think outside the box concept was cold..
oh shit i missed factory plywood ok now its all making sence my bad i gotta look at the expo ok dope shit bags..
slay-
aint the man bag i get where you was going fair play
i like the floor ride puns
overall i connected with bags more.. some things went over my head from both uk guys but i followed bags more.. both great verses though
@Virbius @mal diction @Jack Hallows any chance you could drop a vote on this one plz, doesnt need to be super in-depth, it just feels a bit cunty closing it up based on 2 votes
i'll try to drop a vote by days end
slayer r i said this to you before ... you need more linkage/wordplay in your bars, so they make sense ... the floor ride pun (which was a reach) was the closes thing to a punch in your verse
^that and this "ur a fruad! Thats why I told ya we ain’t the same ur just a bad gag
Thought u was a G like me but the different straps round our shoulders are proof u ain’t man Bag"
i think for that last bar your over explaining the bar defects the comedy appeal
vs
"How’s that bus fare bitch? You’s a goof, it’s time your overconfidence flew the coop,
You got sonned by an egg, oops did you not realise that’s what being a cocky dude’ll do?"
cocka .. but it still works
"If he’d made the quarters we’d have seen Diction dead this tard's lyrics,
Thinking “there’s nowhere for-mal-to-hide”, just to get embalmed in it,"
this is what i was talking about in the chat... yall lean to much on the entendre and just b/c it's an entendre doesnt make it a dope line... slayerr is known for this ..
the outside of the box line almost did something... probably b/c saying box in it made it sound cliche'
the u r extra line ... didnt work for me.. i see how he spelled his name(with a "dot" after the second "R"), but it just seemed like a reach
"I’m making out he’s a no-talent fool, but on the mixtape I got a track called "ASAP" with dude,
though "USSR"s what I might rebrand it to, cuz in Soviet Russia you don't carry bag, bag carries you"
plz tell me what this means...
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i'll have to go with Bag Mandela ... better wordplay, even though some of it didnt close the loop
Haha love that callback to the bus fare line. That ‘cocky dude’ll do’ wordplay was great.Quote:
How’s that bus fare bitch? You’s a goof, it’s time your overconfidence flew the coop,
You got sonned by an egg, oops did you not realise that’s what being a cocky dude’ll do?
Dope. I like the complexity of the compound wordplay, nice and technical.Quote:
You feed bottoms & bottom feed, You vs Faq - horror scene, I was gonna ask him to drop for me to prove even your best’d still get bodied g, but getting Faq-to-reply would be pointless, you already got a sheet,
Yooo I’ve got a ‘for-Mal-to-hide’ wordplay in my notebook, never had a chance to use it. Suffice to say I like it.Quote:
If he’d made the quarters we’d have seen Diction dead this tard's lyrics,
Thinking “there’s nowhere for-mal-to-hide”, just to get embalmed in it,
This is quite a niche reference to a little known chemical process, but super technical with it.Quote:
Sewage treatments the only time I see Slay-climbin shit
Creative use of the visual element. I give extra credit for bars which make a feature of the text format (as well as for bars which do the opposite and imply a performative aspect).Quote:
your last 4 battles; all Ls, time to quit,
Better yet, arrange them in a box shape, like this pic,
then make an effort to fuckin think outside of it,
chortleQuote:
If this cock washing hobgoblin
nice. Not my favourite bar of the lot but it adds variety to the mix.Quote:
gets outta line the glocks poppin,
I'm sayin Slayerr. the moment you R extra, the dots on him,
funny personal bar to end on. Great read.Quote:
I’m making out he’s a no-talent fool, but on the mixtape I got a track called "ASAP" with dude,
though "USSR"s what I might rebrand it to, cuz in Soviet Russia you don't carry bag, bag carries you
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he’s a what now?Quote:
ur a fruad!
Solid enough starter.Quote:
Thats why I told ya we ain’t the same ur just a bad gag,
Thought u was a G like me but the different straps round our shoulders are proof u ain’t man Bag
Interesting. Giving teeth floor ride doesn’t sound very natural but it’s creative nevertheless. Pretty dope I think.Quote:
British dental hygiene gets a poor ride, so I’ll help u out when we meet n greet
I’ll give ur teeth fluoride n then watch u pick ‘em back up off the street
nah, not a fireman sam bar.Quote:
I hate the thought you’ll win with poor bars n on rep alone u retired can
Coz It’ll take more than ur name to convince this crowd that you’re actually fire man
yeah this is it. Nicely placed in-reference, I like it.Quote:
Coming at me? A straight up G? I’ll cable tie ur wrists for trying this, you should be admiring dawg, put you in a box with a shallow lid
So the next time ur spitting bars it’ll be in front of a firing squad like that hallows vids
prob more impactful if I’d watched Naruto, but I’ll take your word for it.Quote:
This fags keen to hide his second life as a drag queen in a feminane mode
Equipped with bushy brows n hair wrapped in a towel, lips with enough filler to pass as a Naruto episode
lol. The real prize is the friends I’ve made along the way. Good bar though.Quote:
Bag put his life savings on winning this! Fuck sake, he’s a heathen bloke, this tourney ain’t legitimised
So when that leaves him broke i can’t articulate how the RW winner will feel but the verb is victimised
thanksQuote:
6. Virb is favourite to win the final but there won’t be any money left for him after bag lost his life savings betting on himself…poor Virb
wait what? nah behave.Quote:
or jack
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Good battle. The culture was the real winner here. And Bag. Bag won.